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Hail, Critters1 of Hate


A creation by hate
of the critters of hate.
Of the first human whole-heartedly,
on high, by a Holy Man at the helm,
of a curious helpmate, 'badly-behaved'.
Hacked from his spare rib behindhand
and then hounded out of it in haste.

Hail, hail!

A creation of hate
by the critters of hate.
By the hunters after 'abhorrent' behavior,
hordes of them, hetero only in a hostile way,
hate lovers of hapless female half-persons.
The 'unholy' others, hissed at and hurt,
all hanged in these heavy breathers' heads.

Hail, hail!

Recreation in hate
for the critters of hate.
For the hitters of headlines who are loved,
head over heels, by their fellow adherents,
upheld by them to the hilt in heinous habits.
Hard-hearted, hot-tempered and hellishly cocky,
making for their halos or huris in heaven.

A last hail to the critters of hate!


Vinsent Nandi, 56.NML-57.NMY
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  1. The word critter derives from creature, an item from the creationist, that is, religious, vocabulary. Here it is used as a name for supernaturalists, exclusivists and extremists who use terms of abuse for others, especially women or members of minorities who are not, or not always, willing to dance to the beat of the male or the majority. 'Critters of hate' or 'hate critters' are, then, those involved in more serious offenses and hate crimes, which, if not explicitly advocated in their brand of religion, are the odious product of its discriminatory leanings and teachings


Hail, Critters of Hate is a poem 'in H major', that is, an alliterative poem with the sound |H| as the leading stave. Occurring again and again at the beginning of stressed syllables, this sound represents the heavy breathing or panting of the 'creatures' who excitedly use offensive language, or worse, for whom it is a form of excitement to harass, injure or kill innocent others, while stimulated by exclusivist prejudice or obsession.

Below the poem is reprinted with the letter h in boldface where it is pronounced as |H| with primary or secondary stress. This clearly shows the positions and preponderance of the major stave. (The tilde indicates a w which is not pronounced, so that |H| is the first sound of the syllable.)


Hail, Critters of Hate

A creation by hate
of the critters of hate.
Of the first human ~hole-heartedly,
on high, by a Holy Man at the helm,
of a curious helpmate, 'badly-behaved'.
Hacked from his spare rib behindhand
and then hounded out of it in haste.

Hail, hail!

A creation of hate
by the critters of hate.
By the hunters after 'abhorrent' behavior,
hordes of them, hetero only in a hostile way,
hate lovers of hapless female half-persons.
The 'unholy' others, hissed at and hurt,
all hanged in these heavy breathers' heads.

Hail, hail!

Recreation in hate
for the critters of hate.
For the hitters of headlines ~ho are loved,
head over heels, by their fellow adherents,
upheld by them to the hilt in heinous habits.
Hard-hearted, hot-tempered and hellishly cocky,
making for their halos or huris in heaven.

A last hail to the critters of hate!

distribution of the stave |H|


For a poem in which 'creatures' in general are compared with the self-existent or 'increate' see Whereas Creatures ... with a complete aural analysis.





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